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Got inspired. And super bored and i love writting poems..so heres one just off the top of my head about Hal's view from him being in the chair and in his bad cycle. Enjoy :) 

 

The man i was , 

i dont wana be.

 Beause the man i was ,

was a monster ya see?

 

Strapped in a chair with out a care

like a dog in a cage

Some thing i would of done in the day 

But im not that man

Not any more

I dont wana be that man 

Not any more

 

I kick and scream

Swear and wish for  a dream

Friends around me 

Trying to help

This sudden change 

From good to bad to good to worse

Its a curse

 

My eyes black

My fangs show

A creature in the dark

I must grow

 

The things iv done

The people iv hurt

The blood iv taken

My soul bistaken

 

Scars iv left

Hearts iv broken

People iv killed

 

I had a friend leo was his name
I remember a convosation
Or so it became

"Lets have hope"
"Hope for what"
"That i can be saved"

Im staying so strong
For some thing that dosent belong
But its like hes always here

A whisper in my ear
Never to disapear

But i have friends.
Helping me through
This cycle im in will soon be in the bin
Bye bye evil
Hello good

My name is Hal
Understood?

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wow, great stuff Kayla! if you get any more Hal inspirations do add them to this topic, i would love to read more! this one could almost be a rap? (Hal rapping? that would be weird)

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Great poem :)

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Thanks yous two :) i will be thinking about writting more :D hahaha Hal rapping :') would be a great sight xX

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Just though id give ya another :D and if theres any one you want me to write a poem for just say ^_^ i was thinking about a cutler one or a Tom one. But any one you want i can do

((This one is based on when Hal was drinking blood back in like the 1800))

 

My eyes are black  , my fangs are sharp.
I sit and wait in the dark.
I see a victem i take a step
They count down there fait it only takes a sec

I pirce there skin
The wonderfull tast,
As blood splashes in my face

 

I'm a monster in the dark
As i sit in the citys park
Wiping blood of my face
Looking for another chace

This is my life
Blood and violence
Dogs and cages
Women and rages

 

The cycle i'm in is a wonderfull thing
Good to bad to good to worse
This life is no curse

I know no better
And see no worse

I chose this path
And way of living
Because im a monster
And need a way of forgiving

The poor girls i kill
And the lack of will
The blood i take
And the people i mistake

Im a vampire for life
My soul had no place
Now im a monster
For godness sake. 

 



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Hi Kayla, Hal rapping would make an excellent comedy sketch! lol!
your 2 poems have been merged into the one topic, if you write any more please can you post them in the one topic, so all your poems are together, thanks! keep going!

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Thanks yeah sorry :) will do more in here! Just really sick :'( been sleeping since yesterday had a doctors ap erlier. Iv got a really bad cold and some other problems !_! .... so havent been on much Xx

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Heres another poem :) As i said iv got a virus/cold so i guess this wont be the best thing iv ever wrote but i wanted to try and write a poem from Hal's eyes when he was talking to leo ((In the Prequel)) About what was going on in his head. So here i go enjoy Xx

I walk into the room
A bottle in my hand
A man sits so mad
Rather sad

Chains rattle
As he tries to battle
He shouts at me
Like i'm a flea
Sitting on his shoulder
Anoying him like the older

I start to talk
About my life
The violence and wars
And how i hated my chores

He said he didn't want to listen
It was to much to do
After everything iv done
It was to much to ask

He started to talk
About what he could do
I stood and listend to

His words in my head
Whisper in stead
It's like hes taking controll
Mixing with my soul

Although i dont have one
Not any more
He makes me feel like i do

I hear footsteps
As he makes me choose
Life or death
Love or lose
I make a choice

I leave my friends and take a stand
Leo this man
Takes my hand

Teaches me well
Right from wrong
Now i belong

~Kayla
~DMA
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Xx

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