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Topic: HAL POEMS for NATIONAL POETRY DAY!

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TJ, sounds like a fanfic plot.  biggrin



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I found an old school writing slate, and for some reason it made me think of Hal.

 

Redemption

Your slate can be wiped clean

And gently buffed to a glowing sheen.

But my stained and scratched

Faded blackboard

Has no inner beauty.

My disgrace can't be erased.

Merely painted with a mask,

Not of gleaming whitewash

But a thick, black, sticky tar.



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Hi anonymous, welcome to the forum. Thanks for sharing your poem with us, the writing slate is a great metaphor. I take it you are of the belief there is, and can be, no redemption for Hal? I am conflicted on that issue, always interested to hear other points of view


I hope you feel able to join us at some point, it feels all kinds of wrong just calling you 'Anonymous'!

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