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Topic: JACK CHAT | SUSPECTS SERIES 1 EPISODE 2 | SUNDAY 13 APRIL 2014

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So to begin. the first 5 scenes (20 mins on these!)

 

Scene 1: 0.00-01.18

Newsreader voiceover:

"Police have tonight been called to the trouble Greenpit nightclub. First reports suggest club owner Kirk Hawthorn has been the victim of a brutal assault"

Jack and Charlie are on the scene at the nightclub where Kirk has been hit over the back of the head. While there, another attack victim is discovered, the club owner tells them it is Kirk's sister, Ziggy Hawthorne.

Charlie suggests it must be a targeted attack, Jack replies

"potentially, we don't want to jump to conclusions straight away"

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Scene 2: 01.19-02.09

Still at the club, Jack and forensics are in the area of the cctv camera, which is missing. Jack asks for the cables to be dusted for fingerprints.

"Charlie"

"yeah?"

"Is your radio broken?"

"Er, no it's not, and I don't know why you're screaming"

"Ok how can I get in touch with you"

Jack asks Charlie to talk to bar manager Guy

"He found her, go and chat to him butter him up use your wit, charm and.."

"is he hot?"

"Charlie.."

"is he?"

"Charlie.."

" I'm only going if he is."

"Charlie it's 3 in the morning, go and talk to him"

"This job

is fucking killing me, I swear."

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Scene 3: 02.10-02.51

Charlie talks to bar manager Guy Ollerbury, who found Kirk and dialled 999

 

Scene 4: 02.52 - 03.26

Jack asks head of security about security detail for the night and if any threats had been made to Kirk in the past couple of weeks

suspectsep2-31.jpg

 

Scene 5: 03.27-03.45

Charlie tells Jack she spoke to the hospital. Ziggy has suffered a brain haemorrhage and also a drugs overdose, Kirk's head injury is not as bad as it looked, he is groggy but ok for interview

 



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so.. scenes 1-5 first?

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I think in that first scene had so much impro from the actors and I'm not sure how many times they had to do that scene.

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So we're staight in with a very different vibe with this episode, lots of sweary Jack, as Charlie and the are on the scene at the greenpit nightclub

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Yeah, we can start. Sorry had to go put the laundry on.  I just remembered that I needed to do it.  See earlier post about distraction. :/ I'm back now.

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yes i have posted the scenes and the screencaps.....remember to keep refreshing the page everyone :)

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And so we get our first dose of Jack sass.  and potty mouth.  When told there's another body he says "bullshit" lol  Then the whole "wit and charm"

The first time I saw this scene I laughed like crazy over this.  I did wonder if he was just tired and in a mood.  



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and straight away the whole Charlie / Jack dynamic....

he tells her not to jump to conclusions (when he does all the time!) and then the banter in the room with the missing cctv camera
"Charlie"

"yeah?"

"Is your radio broken?"

"Er, no it's not, and I don't know why you're screaming"

"Ok how can I get in touch with you"

Jack asks Charlie to talk to bar manager Guy

"He found her, go and chat to him butter him up use your wit, charm and.."

"is he hot?"

"Charlie.."

"is he?"

"Charlie.."

" I'm only going if he is."

"Charlie it's 3 in the morning, go and talk to him"

"This job

is fucking killing me, I swear."

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Yeah Damien looked tired and I believe this was actually filmed at nightime so he might have been tired and I'm not sure how long they did film these scenes.

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That exchange was funny but a bit odd for some reason. 



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I like that Charlie doesn't really take any bullshit from Jack, even though he is her superior.  This scene helps establish how comfortable the two are together, their banter comes natural.  Wonder how long they've been working together.



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the banter is hilarious....
"i dont know why you're screaming" haha! Jack tried to assert his authority and Charlie becomes rebeliious, she is so funny here! "is he hot?" and is the "wit, charm..." quote a deliberate nod to Hal?

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But this was absolutely one of my fav eps and I think in these first scenes Damien really started to find Jacks sass inside him. Scene 3 was crazy good.

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Jozie, what I meant about tired was, that I though Jack was being snappish due to the lateness of the discovery (3am)  But later this just proves to be a natural part of their working relationship.  They have a bit of competition going on all the time.  



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Agree with you Jane, it was bit odd

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I'm guessing the wit and charm came out of him instinctually because of Hal.  Not necessarily deliberately, but definitely ingrained in his memory.



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yeah the competitiveness really shows itself in an obvious way for the first time here and whimsy, it made me wonder about how long they had worked together too.. there is a familiarity here... it was one of our first little clues to 'them' and their dynamic... a first nugget, which made me hungry for more!



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Jane and Josie, what did you find odd, might I ask?



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domino wrote:

yeah the competitiveness really shows itself in an obvious way for the first time here and whimsy, it made me wonder about how long they had worked together too.. there is a familiarity here... it was one of our first little clues to 'them' and their dynamic... a first nugget, which made me hungry for more!


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Ah now I get it Whimsy. I was still thinking everyone looked tired

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as much as i know the lines are improvised, they did have detailad plot desscriptions and a bit of time to discuss and think before delivering the lines, I do believe some lines Damo may have planned, even a bit vaguely... so i did wonder about the wit, charm one....

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I was thinking that conversation between Jack and Charlie when Charlie asked is the bartender hot, it seemed odd

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The dialog just seemed kind of random to me.  Asking if her radio was broken.  I never saw him speak into a radio.  Her randomly asking if the bar guy was hot.  I don't know.  It was just disjointed or something.  I enjoyed the exchange though.  



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Yep, there was too much impro in the air I think. But it was enjoyable

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